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  1. I don't think it's a good thing for canon things to just be c+p'd from the wikia. That's plagiarism. We could get in trouble for that. I say we no longer accept copy pasted canon forms and have people rewrite them in their own words (Not just one or two words off). It's no different than writing custom properties so why not?
  2. So this is how the Skill System works: A character's sheet will contain the following categories - Strength: Self explanatory - The strength your character currently possesses Speed: Self explanatory - How fast your character is Stamina: Tied with speed, how long you can maintain your speed Experience: How experienced your character is (In the realm of knowledge) Will: How determined your character is Tolerance: How much pain your character can tolerate (If this idea pulls through I can write these in more detail!) The ranking system will be similar to that of the Specialty system, just different on how they're distributed. The rankings are as follows: Beginner Novice Adept Advanced Master Ultimate (These will also be provided explanations if this idea pulls through) There are different ways the ranks are dispensed per rank as you start off with them. Any methods of pulling them up through the ranks must be accomplished by training threads. For the sake of fairness and a second opinion, ONLY the staff member checking your application can decide which area gets what level depending on the quality of your app and your individual character to prevent any sort of mismatched skills with the character's abilities stated in the application/CS. The maximum level for each skill to start out at is distributed below - E Rank - All skills must be beginner D Rank - All skills must be beginner C Rank - You are allowed two adepts and the rest beginner B Rank - You are allowed three adepts, one advanced, and the rest beginner A Rank - You are allowed two adepts, two advanced, and the rest beginner S Rank - You are allowed one adept, three advanced, one master, and a beginner SS Rank - You are allowed four advanced and two masters X Rank - You are allowed three advanced, two masters, and one Ultimate Methods to rank up can be discussed and decided if this idea is willing to be built upon!
  3. Ai continued her cautious walk through the unfamiliar area. A bit of walking caused her to loosen up, to take a moment to look around and see the beauty of the forest. She began slowing down, the tenseness in her body receding as she saw a flock of birds take off. The forest suddenly... Seemed far less scary. This was her very first time outside the village, of course most genin's first mission or training was their first time out. But this was... Far more significant to Ai. Even if she couldn't remember, she had been trapped for most of her life... The feeling of freedom, of walking through this forest, was uplifting. Ai had momentarily forgotten the purpose of her trip out and had just began running. She had completely forgotten herself, just exploring the dense area of trees before her. She began seeing many things; insects, lizards, frogs, flowers she had never witnessed before in her life. All her worries and concerns seemed to melt away into oblivion. A sensation tingled in the girls chest, her heart pounding, her lungs frequently taking in and pushing out air, her body pumping with adrenaline. She was happy. For once in her short existence, the girl was happy. A wide smile was on her face, arms spread to the sky. She felt free, free as the colorful birds who took to the sky as she ran past. Everything just seemed to be okay to her. She was completely lost to fantasy in this moment of her day. Of course this was a tad bit dangerous considering the nature of the forest's creatures, but an ill fate did not befall this girl. She was remarkably lucky a large predator didn't come to rip her from euphoria between it's monstrous jaws. Deprivation of the outside gnawed at the girl's mind. Even if she was free to leave her home at any time, whenever she didn't have anything to do she stayed inside. The feeling of entrapment and loneliness was a welcoming presence to her. Even if freedom tasted sweet, she'd forget that feeling and return to hiding in her home, if fate had no cards for her to play. Ai was soon pulled from this light, fuzzy feeling that took over her mind and body by a loud noise, the ground rumbling. She was instantly pulled back into reality, a sense of fear and the instinct of survival taking over, her drawing a kunai knife. She headed towards the source of the noise quietly and carefully, watching for any signs of wild beasts or any other sorts of danger. The rumbles of the ground seemed to get more and more intense as she pressed towards the sound. Her fear grew in her, the enjoyment of the beautiful forest having vanished. A cold, eerie feeling had gripped her heart, tears coming from her eyes. "Ai... My sweet little Ai..." A voice hummed in the back of her mind, too faint to be recognized as her fear climbed and climbed... She went closer and closer to the source of the noise, her body beginning to grow numb and cold. Her yellow eyes were the look of someone witnessing a terrifying monster. What was the heart of this noise? "Ai..." Her fear overflowed, of what the noise could be, of if she would die if she kept going. Her feet kept carrying her, the kunai trembling around in her hand. Her teeth were clamped shut, the scene darkening. The area was suddenly lit by large, suffocating flames. A dark figure stood before her, red glowing eyes peering at her. Ai's knees buckled, staring up at the figure. "You should have stayed in bed... Ai..." Within the confides of reality, the girl was a little ways off from where the men trained, in clear view. She had a glassy stare, fixated just below the tree line, her body still. The girl had obviously gone into shock, her chest rising and falling slowly as time had stood still for her as the hallucinations occupied her headspace. Though what was the most noticeable, were her eyes. They were red, a ring containing a single tomoe in each eye. Her striking yellow eyes were long transformed into this, the mark of the Uchiha bloodline.
  4. Ai packed her ninja tools, being the common and generic ones... Some kunai and shuriken. She carefully organized her pouch, being a decently sized white bag that appears to be in tatters, considering it was a rather old bag that she had found off the trash and tried her best to restore it. It could easily pin to her practically ruined dress, which she tried making more form fitting so it wouldn't have any parts that would be loose or hinder her movement. She had given tying the longer part of the dress to her legs, worried that it would expose her nether regions if she had cut it shorter, for she had no type of pants that would fit her and she was far too considerate to steal. Why was this cream haired lass getting so prepared today you may ask? Well, she was quite a desperate one. Even if she had managed to get through the Academy, from both teacher and student she heard the comments, the sneers, the jokes... "She's hopeless." "She's going to die out there." "I pity her." The voices spoke in her head, the memory of their speech directly on the surface of her mind, being far too easy to recollect and hear them. They echoed in her mind just like if the people were present. She held the side of her head, panting a bit. It was happening again... The voices. The talking, the doubt, the anger, the pity... They progressively got louder and louder in the moment, causing her to fall to her knees as she held her ears shut. It gave no help, shadows appearing before her, laughing. She let out a panicked scream, shutting her eyes shut, then opening once more, the room quiet. Trembling, she rose back to her feet, clipping the bag onto her dress and running outside of the barracks. She had brought herself to the village's opening. The way to the outside... She had never gone. She had never left the village once in her life. The last seven years was already a big step, seeing beyond the closed walls of... Of... Images flickered in her mind, causing her to flinch. She... She didn't remember much past the last seven years of her life. Remembering was pretty much impossible at this point. Sometimes, she wondered if she even had a life outside of the Academy, that the last 7 years were how she was born and lived. No one could accept or deny these delusions that lurked in the girl's head, so she was forced to sit in a kind of middle ground with her consciousness and memories. She headed out into the forest. She had once heard while looking for something that someone had seen a man training in the woods. She took interest in this, wishing to learn for herself. If her teachers and classmates have given up on her, maybe if she sought outside help, she could prove them wrong... She could... She could prove that she was strong! But... She wasn't strong... Everyone else was far above her in skill... It wasn't fair... But she could go for help to get stronger, even if she resented herself for being so weak. She gave a careful trek through the woods after arriving, having a hand near her pouch at all times. She never knew what could pop out and try to attack her... But what was the use... She'd die even if she was prepared for it. She kept her hand near the pouch regardless, the subconscious sensation to keep herself alive still plenty active.
  5. Ai Smol cream girl ready to start kickin
  6. Name | Ai Kotobuki Nickname | -- Title Name | -- Gender | Female Age | 17 Birth Date | 4/1 Hair Color | Cream Eye Color | Yellow Height | 4'7 Weight | 61 lbs Appearance | Ai has the appearance of a rather short statured girl, ironic due to her age. She possesses striking yellow eyes that are impossible to forget once lying eyes upon them, eyes that seem to stare into your soul despite her fun sized appearance. Her hair is a light blonde, taking the appearance of creamy locks that reach past her waist. Her skin is a healthy color, not too pale looking but very soft on the eyes. She is well proportioned, not an inch of her body seeming out of place with one another. She has a well proportioned bust, not being too big or too small for her size. What she wears casually appears to be a once fancy, reminiscent of a lovely blue dress similar to what a princess would wear, sporting white stockings that have long worn, long black gloves, and small black shoes that have peeled with the tides of time with golden buckles dented beyond belief. In actuality, it used to be a dress modified to look lovelier by her brother, though she is unaware of this fact, having tried to make the dress last a little longer as she wasnt rich enough to buy new clothing. She also tends to wear a headband which is just as frilly as the dress, also possessing butterfly wings made of a light metal that she had in possession since she was quite little. This dress is the only thing she has as far as clothes so it has gotten small, dirty, and tattered over the years. Village | Flame Village Clan | Uchiha Village Ranking: | Genin Shinobi Ranking | C Rank Element(s) | Fire Specialties | Genjutsu [Beginner] Bloodline | Uchiha Favorable | Salty and sweet things, Dogs, Warm blankets, "Fixing" people, Feeling safe, Creme Unfavorable | Shellfish, Awkwardness with people, being a coward, remembering her mother, remembering her brother, Large fires Personality | Accepting - Ai is actually a very open and forgiving person. She looks at things for who they are and not for what they're known for and judges based on that. She recognizes that everyone is an individual and is unfair to judge them based on things that aren't even their faults. Even if they were a horrible person in the past, Ai is willing to be that person to give them another chance. She believes it isn't fair to others if they're penalized or even highly regarded due to past mistakes or their ancestor's actions. She even is receptive to other creatures, engaging in strange behaviors like asking for animal's names or being overly polite and friendly to others she doesn't even know. She knows everything about respect and engages in it no matter who she interacts with. In her eyes, everyone deserves some kindness. Submissive - Due to her rather introverted nature and lack of social skills, Ai is a very submissive person to others. At times she can be far too polite or too quick to back off for her own good. Due to this she can easily be taken advantage of with the right tactics deployed on her. Whenever things seem to get tense she quickly shuts up. She's rare to ever defy what she's told unless she feels strongly opposed to it. If people say they like red, she'll like red. If people say they don't like the sky, she'll say she doesn't like it. She often times gets picked on for being so spineless, but she truly had no good direction or anyone to teach her how to be strong in her life. Empathetic - Even if she is a weak person, Ai is still a kind person to everyone she meets. With her limited abilities, she tries to make up for it for trying her best and believing in everyone. She tries to understand everyone's plight and address it to the best of her ability. She's willing to help even her worst enemy if they need it so. She tries to level with people and figure out how to make everyone happy with her and accept her. She always is up to cheer others on and bring things into a positive light. Though really these feelings come from a deep seeded feeling of... Envy. Envious - Deep down, Ai is very jealous of others around her. She's upset that she's so weak compared to others and so inept with things that others seem to excel in. She feels no matter how hard she tries, theres always someone better than her in something. These often times result in self destructive tendencies like suicidal thoughts or depression. She wish she could be as strong and brave as everyone else, but it seems like even her best is not enough to be recognized by others. Traumatized - Ai is a very troubled person mentally. Due to her mother's murder and her entire life basically being uprooted by her own brother, even if she cannot recall it herself, has a profound effect on her mind. Whenever she is reminded of the event, she breaks down into a quiet fit, falling to her knees and having a panic attack, indicating PTSD. Sometimes she has flashes of the place burning around her, or even hallucinations of her mother or brother being present. She has no recollection of most of her childhood due to trauma, so most of the time she isn't even aware and often has black outs in her memory during these moments of panic. Low Self Esteem - Despite being eager to believe in others, Ai is very hesitant to practice this on herself. She feels like she can't do anything right, or crack up to be like anyone else. She believes that she was dealt a terrible deck of cards and thus she is forever to struggle in the game of life. She feels like no matter what she does, not a thing is to be easy for her. She's kind of accepted this way of life to be truth, and has become very depressed due to it though hides it with a smile and optimism. Sensitive - Due to her bloodline, she is naturally very emotional and expressive. Even if she tries to hide emotions they seem to spill out a bit to ones with a trained eye. Her body says it all, the absolute truth of her emotions isn't easy for her to cake with smiles and laughs after all. She is very sensitive to rather dramatic and sudden shifts in emotion due to tensions or stress. Philosophy & Beliefs | See Personality History & Background | Prior to Birth Complications arose for her mother as Ai was an unborn child. Her mother along with her older brother in tow migrated to the Flame Village in order to give birth and get proper help. Birth Ai had issues being born, having been a very weak fetus and hardly managing to last through the pregnancy. She had to stay in the hospital for the first year of her life, hooked up to life support and carefully watched. Her brother had a lot of concern for her making it through the first year, the child so small and fragile one wrong move could seriously hurt or kill her. Ai did manage to pull through and get strong and healthy enough to leave the hospital. Her mother was completely unfit to care for her, being blind and nearly deaf, causing her older brother to grow extremely over protective over her. While her mother tried caring for her, her brother always grew angry and took her from the struggling woman in fear she would hurt or kill her. He constantly watched Ai, even as she slept. Early Life In Home Ai was very delayed in learning things due to her prolonged stay in the hospital, such as speech or reading. Her brother would keep her up for hours trying to force her to learn how to do things and speed up her progress. This made her grow fearful of her brother, as he threatened or beat her any time she did something he didn't like. Any time she could she tried to seek comfort in her mother or her assistant dog, Creme. Day after day was absolute torture and trauma for her as she tried to learn things to make her brother happy with her. She tried so so hard to please him, to comfort him, to assure she's making progress, but the beatings and punishments only seemed to get worse and worse the harder she tried. It was pushed to the point the girl was sleep deprived and crying every day over her treatment. Her brother was so paranoid of her he never allowed her to leave the house or speak to anyone aside from him. Complications Her brother's paranoia worsened as the years crawled by, the girl past learning and now on the level of being the man's slave. She did chores and cooked meals for him every day, even doing things to make him happy. If she did something the slightest bit wrong, she would get a beating. She never even peered out a window because even thinking of going outside was grounds for a whipping. Her mother tried to the best of her ability to intervene in this, but any time her brother caught the two interacting he'd shout at their mother and pull the child away. He became increasingly annoyed that the woman tried to interact with the child he put his blood sweat and tears into, until he decided to move onto extremes. The Tragedy Deep in the night, a 10 year old Ai had heard noises from another room. Creme had been with her in the room, sleeping with her in the makeshift bed on the floor. She got up, curious but afraid of what it was. She slowly went down the steps, holding a brush in hand for it was the only pain causing thing she could use as a weapon. She swerved a corner, and saw a sight that would mar her mind forever; Dimly lit by a fireplace was two people; a tall man hanging over a figure lying on the ground, blood pooling on the floor with it's fresh iron scent hanging in the air. A weapon was held tight in the man's grasp, as he slowly looked to her and whispered, so sweetly whispered... "You shouldn't have come out of bed, Ai." A loud crash resounded in the room, and suddenly everything was blisteringly hot... On fire... The house was on fire... Creme immediately grasped Ai's arm in her jaw, so hard it hurt, might have even bled, and yanked her through the house, to the door. The dog soon broke down the barrier keeping her from the place she didnt think she would ever see; Outside. Soon the residence was swarmed and Ai was taken into custody. She was later told that her brother's corpse was found in a suicide, her mother dead, and her home destroyed. Moving on Nowhere to go, or stay, or be, Ai had been instructed to attend the academy, despite being at the age children normally graduated at. Ai accepted it, for she had no idea what else to do or be. She had no one to help her or be there for her through her ordeal, going through immense stress through her academy days. She was often times very ill during classes and didn't preform very well in some places. No one had much of a concern for her aside from her mother's own dog, so she struggled through becoming a genin at a much slower rate than others did. She had seen two classes graduate before her and had been picked on by many. Present Life Ai finally managed to prove herself and become a genin, though has residency in the shinobi barracks. She wasn't even assigned to a proper squad as if yet due to her difficulties, and thus is in a very rough patch of her life.
  7. @Suijin Umiken Donezo. Just added a lil bit.
  8. Okay gomen I'll add a little something in there. I did have an idea but i didnt wanna reveal it but y'know i have a way it can still be a bit of a surprise.
  9. Bloodline Name | Kotobuki Clan Possessors | Ai Kotobuki [3 more bearers allowed with permission from Lillian] Appearance | Whenever any hazardous chemicals enter the body (Like poisons or other substances that otherwise disrupt normal body activity like alcohol) their veins are far more apparent in certain parts of their body, namely wherever the disrupting chemical resides. Veins pop out in the area where poison is being excreted as well. Abilities | Chemical Filtering [PASSIVE]– The bearer of this bloodline has a specific makeup of cells that are actually quite strong and as a body process, automatically filter any chemicals that attack the body. If the chemical poses potential harm to the cells (Like poisons or plants or otherwise), the body automatically filters it so it no longer poses harm to the body. But, there is a catch here. The filtering process the body automatically engages with stabilizing a dangerous chemical requires a lot of physical energy, and since the body will be so focused on preventing death via chemical hazard, depending on the rank of the poison, can cause a rather unpleasant set of reactions. Of course the reaction lessens if the bearer’s rank is higher than the poison’s rank, but it is still a rather unpleasant experience nonetheless. For lesser ranked poisons vs a higher rank, the bearer can experience extremely uncomfortable symptoms, such as nausea or confusing. For higher ranked poisons vs a lower rank, the bearer can experience things like ego death, symptoms akin to a terrible high or being very drunk, and can even experience trauma or fall into a temporary coma. Though it can save one from death, it exchanges it with the potential for excruciating suffering that can last days, weeks, even months on end. The staple effects of whatever poison do still take effect along with the filtering’s side effects, minus any death-causing effects. A blessing and a curse type ability, to be up front about it. [If the poison has not been filtered by the end of the topic, the very next topic in the timeline will still have the poison being filtered until the post count is over] E Rank All poisons above and equal to E rank takes 10 posts to filter. D Rank All poisons above and equal to D rank takes 9 posts to filter, E rank poisons have a lesser effect and take 8 posts to filter. C Rank All poisons above and equal to C rank takes 8 posts to filter, any poisons below C rank have a lesser effect and take 7 posts to filter. B Rank All poisons above and equal to B rank takes 7 posts to filter, any poisons below B rank have a lesser effect and take 6 posts to filter. A Rank All poisons above and equal to A rank takes 6 posts to filter, any poisons below A rank have a lesser effect and take 5 posts to filter. S Rank All poisons above and equal to S rank takes 5 posts to filter, any poisons below S rank have a lesser effect and take 4 posts to filter. SS Rank All poisons above and equal to SS rank takes 4 posts to filter, any poisons below SS rank have a lesser effect and take 3 posts to filter. X Rank All poisons equal to X rank takes 3 posts to filter, any poisons below X rank have a lesser effect and take 2 posts to filter. Poisons A rank and above can stack and prolong the filtering period and even make the symptoms more severe. A rank and above stacking effects Hit with 2 – Adds 3 posts to the filtering process Hit with 3 – Adds 6 posts to the filtering process Hit with any more – Add 3 more posts to the filtering process Hit with 2 of different ranks – Must complete two topics of at least 4 posts for poison to finish filtering Hit with 3 of different ranks – Must complete three topics of at least 6 posts for poison to finish filtering Hit with any more – Must complete five topics of at least 8 posts for poison to finish filtering Though there is a lot of suffering in being hit with poison multiple times, there is plenty of reward. If the bearer is hit with the same poison a certain amount of times, their body can actually recreate it and utilize it through chakra, moving onto it’s next ability… Chemical Excretion [ACTIVE]– The body of the bearer is capable of remembering and even replicating biological chemicals (Such as hormones) since they are already present in the body, and can remember any hazardous chemical it filters since the chemicals, much like suppressed viruses, do not leave the body. The bearer of this bloodline must be hit with the same poison five times to have it perfectly copied. It can copy the poison before hand, but the poison will have 3 ranks less of an effect as the original poison (Or for lower ranks, just the lowest rank possible for this site as how weak it can go) until the requirement of five hits of the same poison has been met. Once the bearer has been hit with this same poison five times, their body no longer has to go through the long filtering process and can easily make the poison not dangerous to their body due to familiarity. The user is also able to brew new poisons in their body but only by mixing chemicals already present in their body. Biological chemicals like those present in the brain are available to the user by default, since the body was born with them. Weaknesses | This bloodline only protects the bearer from death by any sort of chemicals. They will still suffer any other effects by poisons plus those from filtering, just minus any death-causing symptoms. The bearer cannot create poisons that are above their rank unless they have an increased spec in Medical Jutsu as a primary. The composition is too complicated for their body to recreate, no matter how many times they've been hit by it. Just because the bearer knows what makes up a particular poison or chemical, does not mean their body knows. No loopholes here, they still must put the chemical into their body to filter or they will have no immunities or be able to control/recreate the poison. The user cannot extend any oozed poison from their body. It acts as an intrusive liquid, only able to take effect through contact with the skin. Chakra Cost | [These apply, no matter what the rank] Poison only on skin's surface - 30 CP Oozing poison from hand/foot - 40 CP Oozing poison from arm - 80 CP Oozing poison from torso - 85 CP Oozing poison from leg - 110 CP Oozing poison from both arms - 120 CP Oozing poison from both legs - 140 CP Oozing poison from entire body - 175 CP
  10. Jutsu Name | Breath of Stirring Jutsu Type | Genjutsu Ranking | C-B-A Element(s) | -- Specialty(s) | Genjutsu Energy Cost | C- 10 CP B- 25 CP A- 50 CP Handsigns | C- Rat - Serpent - Bird B- Rat - Serpent - Bird - Rat A- Rat - Serpent - Bird - Rat - Hare Range | C - 1 Meter B - 3 Meters A - 6 Meters Duration | C - 3 Posts B - 4 Posts A - 7 Posts Description | Usagi breathes a gas, much like smoke in appearance, towards her targets after establishment of it's effects are created. If breathed in, the victim will feel whatever emotion she associates to the smoke. If she wanted to make the target feel happy, for example, she'd apply happiness triggers to it. This can be used recreationally and in combat, to serve as a distraction to enemies or a benefit towards allies. How the person reacts to inhaling the breath is completely dependent on their personality. Everyone feels things different, after all. One person could simply break down crying if inhaling a sad version of it, whereas another could just be in a droopy mood. The ranking of the jutsu does also play a factor in this, being the higher the rank, the more likely stronger emotions will be invoked by the smog. Though for the absolute best effects, the target must be in the range of the fog. Other Effects | Whoever was under the Genjutsu will still remember how they felt. This can cause a many things to happen, from trauma to addiction to, well, simply nothing happening. Up to how the target feels after being inflicted. Requirements | Be Usagi or learn it from Usagi. Status | Personal
  11. Ohhh. In hindsight it does sound more like a medical ninjutsu tbh... Is it alright if I keep this on hold til I can find a use?
  12. Two thingamabobs to be checked is all.
  13. In agreement with Jin. If Soul comes on and has a logical reason to have the system how it is, I will accept the decision. I wish to hear it straight from the horse's mouth if this is true or not. I still see zero evidence this was a staff decision.
  14. Honestly I think a good solution to some restrictions like mind reading or mind control is if the controller/reader got the permission of the other person to do it OOC. It's best we encourage communication and stuff!
  15. Well y'know what, I decided to maybe try a public bloodline y'know? Maybe it's a bit early for me to try to go for this stuff X3 It's fine to archive it or whatever, might fix it up at a later date.
  16. Bloodline Name | Eyes of Mine Possessors | Usagi [ONLY POSSESSOR CURRENTLY IN EXISTENCE] Appearance | Usagi's dojutsu takes the form of her sclera completely darkening, the outline around her irises becoming white, and her eyes turning blood red. Her pupils sharpen into a slit like shape, similar to a snake's except far more elaborate. The inner part of her pupils are a white slit, seeming to stand out far more than the rest of her eyes. What balances this out is at night or in the dark, these eyes have a slight glow, seeming to stand out in complete, utter darkness with close inspection. The strength of the glow depends on the stage of this dojutsu. Abilities | Enthralling Eyes [Stage One] Usagi's dojutsu is capable of forcing prolonged eye contact between her and another person for three posts. In this stage, she is only capable of grasping only one person's attention. This person's gaze, once locked onto hers, cannot leave unless either the 3 post limit finishes, her dojutsu deactivates, or she faces away from the target. It's only function in this stage is to either provide a distraction, allow leeway for Genjutsu to be preformed, or any other conceivable function of forced eye contact. Entrapping Eyes [Stage Two] This is where some real use can come into Usagi's eyes. She can peer into a small part of the target's chakra system, particularly their brain and head area. By reading this chakra signature, she cannot recognize any individuals through this, but rather read one's emotions through the movement of their chakra. More intense emotions are conveyed by more violent flows and calmer, more relaxed ones conveyed through slower, calmer flows. She is only able to peer at one person's emotions for the same amount of posts as the previous stage. Escalating Eyes [Stage Three] This stage merely expands the capabilities of the previous stage's effects. It expands her limit from one person to three people as far as those who can become trapped in her gaze at a time. It also creates a glow in her eyes that can span out to a short range dull light (think of a dying flashlight or a dim lantern; about that bright and large) that can cause people's eyes to gravitate to her own in order to trap them. This also strengthens the length to about 6 posts of duration she can keep people under her gaze's trap. Intruding Eyes [Stage Four] This ability of Usagi's goes a step further and can actually peer into the mind of the target. She can only see the surface though, only their present thoughts, by tapping into their brain's chakra flow and decoding it. She needs a single post to decode thoughts, and strong concentration. Decieving Eyes [Legendary Stage] This is the ultimatum of Usagi's base visual abilities. With this ability, she can pierce past the surface of one's mind and dig into their memories. This is the deepest her eyes can ordinarily pick through someone's mental functions and see into them. She is able to preform this for a varying amount of posts, depending on how deep she has dived. All stages are capable of piercing an icy, cold fear in the target, as if a predator were watching them ready to lunge and eat them. Weaknesses | A common weakness for all the stages is eyewear. Any kind of thing obstructing the eyes, whether it be glasses, sunglasses, goggles, etc. will prevent the dojutsu from affecting them considering the gaze must pierce directly into the eyes. Keeping one's eyes shut before she activates the dojutsu also functions as a weakness for it, as long as they didnt take a glance at her eyes. A weakness for both stages Two and Four would be to mute any sort of thought or emotion, and of course doesn't work on any emotionless or thoughtless beings. A giant weakness for the Legendary Stage is that Usagi cannot move no matter what. It isn't a conscious effort that is needed to not move, her body literally locks in place to focus all energy into memory probing. She cannot move until the dojutsu deactivates or she reverts to a previous stage. Stages Four and Legendary have lesser effect on those who are stronger in rank of Usagi, meaning she cannot dive as deep or read as many thoughts as she would one who was weaker than her. Legendary Stage has several levels of depth; Conscious, Unconscious, Subconscious, and Core. Each stage costs different levels of chakra to access. The deeper she goes, the more chakra is needed to access and probe, along with more posts needed to access. Conscious requires 3 extra posts tagged onto the 6 required, Unconscious needs 4, Subconscious 5, and Core 7. Stages Four and Legendary have the potential of leaving lasting mental damage or trauma upon the one having their mind picked at due to stress. This has the potential of certain memories or thoughts becoming damaged, twisted, or even lost if not careful. Anytime she hits a post deadline she must be allowed 2 posts to cool off before further use is possible. Chakra Cost | Stage 1 - 30 CP Advance! - +20 CP Stage 2 - 50 CP Advance! - +40 CP Stage 3 - 90 CP Advance! - +60 CP Stage 4 - 150 CP Advance!- +80 CP Legendary Stage - (Con) 230 CP (Uncon) 240 CP (Subcon) 260 CP (Core) 300 CP
  17. Autohits? If you mean the forced stare that can easily be avoided in combat. Not many times are shinobi close or able to see each other's eyes. Sure my character would be intentionally trying to go for it but really as long as the target avoids eye contact. I can change the mind reading part to something else though, no worries!
  18. In need of checkin'!